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2/8/2004 |
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Teresa:
AWE - SUM !!!
Tom. |
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| Reviewed by cynth'ya
reed |
1/6/2004 |
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The formula for this poem is
E=MC (2)
Translation:
E(mily's Effervescence)
= M(use) C(reatively) for (2) people in love.
cynthya
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| Reviewed by Jeff
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11/18/2003 |
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| So, then is the cubed root of
passion = love squared? |
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| Reviewed by Deborah
Russell |
11/11/2003 |
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| Lovely poem and
image. |
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| Reviewed by Alex
Nodopaka |
11/6/2003 |
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| You summed it all in the only
one that really counts. |
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| Reviewed by serenety
L |
11/1/2003 |
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that's the maths even I do
understand...
Outstanding.
Nico |
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| Reviewed by Jack
Roberts |
10/22/2003 |
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Wonderful write! Congrats on
your contest win!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Lady
A_The_Source |
10/22/2003 |
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ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!! I LOVE
IT!
I am smiling!
thats a good sign!!!
ty
pax
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| Reviewed by Jay
Chattin |
10/21/2003 |
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| Loved it, well
done. |
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| Reviewed by Karen
Cino |
10/20/2003 |
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I loved it! So rich and full of
love and emotions. Excellent write!
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Ian
Thorpe |
10/20/2003 |
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| Very evocative and sensitively
written. BUT - one is the only number, anything else is a
concept. Let you mathematician reviewers think about that
;-) |
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| Reviewed by Nicole
Davis Vergara |
10/20/2003 |
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{{{{Emilie}}}}
This is
truly a excellant write! I do believe my dark idol/poetic
heart below me has summed it up all so beautifully!!!!
Expertly and adultly done romance!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Joseph
Armstead |
10/19/2003 |
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| Simple and beautiful, Emilie,
direct and inarguable! Very romantic summation of grown-up
love between intelligent people! |
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| Reviewed by Maria
Lupinacci |
10/19/2003 |
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Emiley,
Beautiful loving
write! Wishing you two all
of the best!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca
(Becca) Henry |
10/18/2003 |
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Beautiful and full of love for
your "sum".(Alex)
I wish you two the best.
Lotsa Love,
Becca p.s. Thanks for the review! |
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| Reviewed by AKA
ShyPoet1 |
10/18/2003 |
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| That's very pretty and full of
love. |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn
Huntington |
10/18/2003 |
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So sweet and full of love.
Huzzah!!
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Marilyn
Seray |
10/17/2003 |
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| This is truly
gorgeous! |
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| Reviewed by Regis
Auffray |
10/17/2003 |
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| That pretty well sums it up.
Lucky Alex. I posted one called, "The Simple Math Of You"
which is along similar lines. Nice
equation,Émilie. |
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| Reviewed by Cathy
Montgomery |
10/17/2003 |
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| Beautiful poetry, beautifully
written!!! |
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| Reviewed by Carmen
Ruggero |
10/17/2003 |
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Just had to come and visit your
site. My Sum lifted me up. That last stanze is outstanding. I
could feel it vivrating with energy. Good work!
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie
Perrette |
10/16/2003 |
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Awesome, and an original
concept applied too. I like Very much Its nice to come up with
something other than usual poetry.Shows true imagination and
flare Onyah mate.
XXX Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn
Red Bear "The Bear Paw" |
10/16/2003 |
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You go girl! Sounds like a song
to me.... one by the beatles... 1x1 is still one... the way we
are... so pure in all it's simplicity... great profoundness
here, girl... stay strong...
In Spirit,
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| Reviewed by Russ
Okamura |
10/16/2003 |
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The versatility of your poetic
talent is amazing! How does one count the ways that define the
broad perspective of your artistic heart and soul?
E=MC2!
The pure Energy you create from the Mass of your poetic
soul is Constantly at the speed of light equivalent! It is
infinite! |
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| Reviewed by Dale
Clark |
10/16/2003 |
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| Beautiful sums it up!
;) |
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| Reviewed by Kate
Clifford |
10/15/2003 |
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| Wonderful cute
write! |
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| Reviewed by Janet
Caldwell |
10/15/2003 |
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I love this and I say to you
and Alex that you are royalty. Whomever doesn't like it must
have a real ego prob. Love to you both.
JC
xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Michael
Morash |
10/15/2003 |
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Another brilliant write. So
much is said in a few lines that the story keeps going in the
imagination.
Bravo,
Micahel |
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| Reviewed by Floria
Kelderhouse |
10/15/2003 |
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| Emilie...I just love to read
you...this is so touching...great heartwarming
write...floria |
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| Reviewed by La
Belle Rouge |
10/15/2003 |
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| Just a perfect equation! Love
it Emilie. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka
Boukes |
10/15/2003 |
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Mathematical romance...most
interesting write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Alexander
Shaumyan |
10/15/2003 |
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Beautiful poem, Teresa. I see
you got old Gilbert jealous. :) Mathematics and jealousy don't
mix very well. Let him stick to what he knows best: redneck
poems about Bubba, war stories, and spreading false rumors
about others. As Albert Einstein said: "Great spirits have
always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds."
Your poem reminds me of e.e. cummings who wrote:
now i
love you and you love me
(and books are shutter
than
books
can be)
and deep in the high that does nothing
but fall
(with a shout
each
around we go all)
there's somebody calling who's we
we're everything
brighter than even the sun
(we're everything greater
than books
might mean)
we're everyanything more
than believe
(with a spin
leap
alive we're alive)
we're wonderful one times one
You've shown me what
it means to be alive. Love, Alex |
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| Reviewed by Christine
Morell |
10/15/2003 |
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Briiliant poetry Emilie. You
know I'm a fan
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by E.
Richardson |
10/15/2003 |
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| Very well done, Emilie...a
precise but soflly romantic piece |
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| Reviewed by Joseph
Sherman |
10/15/2003 |
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Teresa,
This is a
beautiful testimony of love! That last stanza really rocks!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Andre
Bendavi Ben-YEHU |
10/15/2003 |
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October 15, 2003 -07:22 EST.
Salutations and Benisons to Everyone.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
< < < < < < < < < < < <
< < < < < < < < < <
This
poem, "My Sum" is the net of math in the cycle of sunsets.
Blest be those that stand to enrich the Pages of
Poetry's History.
This Your "My Sum", Poet, drops
mellifluous dews of grace on the faces of the readers.
May You enjoy a healthy day.
Andre
Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Jerry
Bolton |
10/15/2003 |
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| This was a very well done
poem. |
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| Reviewed by Mitchell
Waldman |
10/15/2003 |
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| Well done. (& FYI, you
can't copyright "related concepts," only the
words) |
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| Reviewed by Dens
Dreamweaver |
10/15/2003 |
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| You sum-merized this oone
perfectly! |
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| Reviewed by Debashish
Haar |
10/14/2003 |
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Emilie mathematicians have
always fought with physicists for various reasons in
history:-)
Hey the riddle in the last line 1+1=2 is not
that simple to "prove"! Though it is simple to "show" with
fingers..
Excellent poem{{Smiles}}
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| Reviewed by Transcendental
Poet |
10/14/2003 |
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| Excellent work! I am sure Alex
will like it..;) |
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| Reviewed by J.
Allen Wilson |
10/14/2003 |
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This is such a beautiful write.
Strait to the point without any parallelograms thrown in to
cause confusion.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Zenith
Elliott |
10/14/2003 |
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| Emilie, you are a wonderful
poetess and this is a beautiful poem! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Grady
Morrison |
10/14/2003 |
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On the horizon she does appear,
during the sunrise and as the sunsets.
But during the
inbetween time she is invisible to the eye, I wonder why? but
to wonder why would be to linger in time itself, visit worlds
undiscovered. So I explore. Lovely little math piece, shows
affection about sum, I mean some(one) or maybe sum(two). Maybe
I'm not a good mathematician. hugs G |
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| Reviewed by Eileen
Waldron |
10/14/2003 |
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| It adds up to wonderful poetry
in my summation;-)Beautifully done Emilie! |
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| Reviewed by Lady
Peg |
10/14/2003 |
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Emiley,
This is so good
creative and beautiful sums up
one romantic Poem
awesome.
lady peg |
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